Narrative Assessment: Sanjana and Writing

Learner: Sanjana
Area:Writing Level 2
Date: 12.11.18 
In Writing, we have been recounting our experiences. A recount is retelling a learner's experience from their own point of view. Some of our experiences include: the blindfold game, cricket and basketball. We have been learning to add in detail by using adjectives, verbs, feelings and emotions in our writing. Our hapu have been working hard to include at least three different words to paint a better picture for our audience.

Sanjana is able to write and her build sentences into paragraphs. She has been learning to add more detail and ideas into her writing using new interesting words like adjectives and verbs. Sanjana thinks carefully about her ideas and is able to put them into paragraphs. She is developing her curiosity by asking questions and is slowly making connections by using ideas discussed in a larger group. Sanjana collaborates with others by sharing her ideas in discussions. She is beginning to think carefully about her ideas and the audience she is writing for.

Key Competencies: Managing Self Thinking Relating to others Participating and Contributing and through the use of digital tools - using language, symbols and texts 

Next Steps: 
Continue using detailed ideas in your writing
Reflect on your learning and think of how you can improve
Keep practising your writing at home

Flamingos

Guess what we happened? Our hapu went to the library.We played a game Of Blindfolds. My experience was weird and funny because i bumped into too many things.My partner for blindfolds was suri.First it was may turn to be blindfolded and suri had to guide me.What was hard About guiding was i kept going the wrong way.Suri could not hold on to me or it would be cheating.you could only say front,back left or Right. Also did you know today,we did the same thing but on the playground.Suri banged me into a piece of log hanging.Then she made me go up the steps and go across the woden wiggly logs.